Thanks Suresh, We will take your comment into account when we do the next revision.
Cheers Magnus On 2013-12-17 06:23, Suresh Krishnan wrote: > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer > for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before > posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-security-options-09.txt > Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan > Review Date: 2013/12/16 > IESG Telechat date: 2013/12/19 > > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC but > I do have a few comments that the authors may wish to consider. > > Minor > ===== > > * Section 1 > > This sentence is a bit awkward > > The IETF considers it important that protocols implement, and makes > available to the user, secure modes of operation > > Suggest rewording to something like > > The IETF considers it important that protocols implement secure modes of > operation and make them available to users. > > * Section 2.1 > > I am not sure what this statement means. Can you please clarify? > > "Here the combination of the security protocol protecting the RTP > session and its RTP and RTCP traffic and the key-management protocol > becomes important in which security statements one can do." > > * Section 4.1.4 > > s/will be more relevant then/will be more relevant than/ > > This sentence is hard to read. Please consider rewording > > "Commonly by provisioning the verifier with the public part of a root > certificate, this enables the verifier to verify a trust chain from the > root certificate down to the identity certificate." > > > Thanks > Suresh > > -- Magnus Westerlund ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Multimedia Technologies, Ericsson Research EAB/TVM ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Ericsson AB | Phone +46 10 7148287 Färögatan 6 | Mobile +46 73 0949079 SE-164 80 Stockholm, Sweden| mailto: [email protected] ---------------------------------------------------------------------- _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
