On 5/12/07, robert burrell donkin <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
On 5/10/07, Niall Pemberton <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> On 5/9/07, robert burrell donkin <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > http://incubator.apache.org/guides/graduation.html now has a
> > reasonable quantity of content. the organisation could probably be
> > improved, some necessary content has probably been missed and more
> > proof reading would be good. so, this is a good time to post the draft
> > for review.
> >
> > if you can find time, please take a look and post feedback to this
> > thread, open a JIRA or just patch the document.
>
> I fixed a couple of links/anchors:
>
> http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?view=rev&revision=536731
thanks
> The only comment I have for the "On Community" part of the Notes
> section is emphasising more that community at the ASF exists on
> mailing lists. Probably something we take for granted - but may not be
> obvious for newcomers. F2F conversations, IRC, private mail may all be
> well and good, but they are non-existent as far as ASF community goes,
> unless things are taken back to the list. IMO it would be good to
> start this section emphasising this and the fact that the mailing list
> archive is the tangible evidence on the health of a community.
i've rewritten and expanded that section for the second draft
take a look and see what you think
Looks really good to me - the only comment I would make is the use of
the word "serendipity" which isn't a particularly common and may be
confusing, esp. for non-native English speakers.
Niall
- robert
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