Re: [docs] Please review first draft of graduation guide

[Craig L Russell]

Is it just me, or did someone remove log4php and log4net from the stylesheet and forget to update the site? I get lots of diffs after updating the site and then generating it...

Craig

On May 12, 2007, at 10:28 AM, Niall Pemberton wrote:

I have made a bunch of further typo corrections to the graduation guide that I'll commit once I get the site stylesheet issue figured out. One substantive comment: Under the recommendation vote, I don't think a Mentor should start the vote in the community. It should be one of the PPMC members.

On 5/12/07, robert burrell donkin <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

On 5/10/07, Niall Pemberton <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

> > http://incubator.apache.org/guides/graduation.html now has a

> > for review.
> >

> > thread, open a JIRA or just patch the document.
>
> I fixed a couple of links/anchors:
>
>    http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?view=rev&revision=536731

thanks

> The only comment I have for the "On Community" part of the Notes
> section is emphasising more that community at the ASF exists on

> unless things are taken back to the list. IMO it would be good to

> archive is the tangible evidence on the health of a community.

i've rewritten and expanded that section for the second draft

take a look and see what you think

> On 5/9/07, robert burrell donkin <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > reasonable quantity of content. the organisation could probably be > > improved, some necessary content has probably been missed and more > > proof reading would be good. so, this is a good time to post the draft > > if you can find time, please take a look and post feedback to this > mailing lists. Probably something we take for granted - but may not be > obvious for newcomers. F2F conversations, IRC, private mail may all be > well and good, but they are non-existent as far as ASF community goes, > start this section emphasising this and the fact that the mailing list

Looks really good to me - the only comment I would make is the use of
the word "serendipity" which isn't a particularly common and may be
confusing, esp. for non-native English speakers.

Niall

- robert

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