Hi Anthony,
I just took my first read through and it appears to be quite polished in the current state, but I do have a few comments to add: PMTUD -- It's good to see this specifically brought up. NAT -- I see you point for bringing this up and in my mind, I think the largest pain point will be with regard to training of our junior engineers when RFC1918 space is no longer "just the inside". It makes sense that one might run into operational issues given that device software was written within the context of RFC1918 being the internal side of a NAT setup, or firewall policies for that matter. DNS -- this section seems to be a little wordy in my opinion, here's a potential rewrite that comes to my mind: Many ISPs utilise their DNS to perform both forward and reverse resolution for infrastructure addresses. Within a privately numbered core, the ISP itself would still have the capability to perform name resolution of their own infrastructure, however, others beyond the ISP would not have this capability. MLPS VPN -- I'm curious to know your intended scope on this topic? Overall though, It looks to fill in a needed place of reference for future discussion on the topic. David. David Swafford, CCNP, CEH, CWSP Senior Network Engineer, CareSource On Sun, Jul 31, 2011 at 8:48 PM, Anthony Kirkham <[email protected]> wrote: > > All, > > I'd appreciate any advice on how I might progress this draft. I'm reasonably > happy with it now, but unsure how to take it the next step. I'd greatly > appreciate any guidance. > > Document draft-kirkham-private-ip-sp-cores > Revision 04 > WG Individual Submission > Document date 2011-06-16 > Submission date 2011-06-16 > Title Issues with Private IP Addressing in the Internet > > People in the past have indicated the draft is useful. I hope this is still > the case, despite it taking a long while to get to this stage. > > Regards and thanks > Tony K > > > -- > > Anthony Kirkham > Solution Architect > > World Wide Security > Service Practice > > [email protected] > Phone: +61 (0)7 3238 8203 > Mobile: +61 (0)401 890 494 > > CISSP, CCIE# - 1378 > > Level 12, 300 Adelaide Street > Brisbane, Qld, 4000 > Australia > Cisco home page > > > > > _______________________________________________ > GROW mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/grow > _______________________________________________ GROW mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/grow
