Hi Darrel, yes indeed there are many recommendations by the editors.
This is normal since they take over the document and will imprint their writing style/vision/structure. So the first step is exactly what you say, see if we all agree (accepting or rejecting) the suggestions so that editors and WG are all on the same page. Next step (Honolulu) having a document with no (or at least very few) comments, so to get closer to get this document done. Like Joel, I would like to invite people read the document despite the late submission. ciao L. On 16 Jul 2014, at 21:56, Darrel Lewis (darlewis) <[email protected]> wrote: > > > On Jul 16, 2014, at 9:47 AM, Joel M. Halpern <[email protected]> wrote: > >> The chairs and listed authors are happy to call the WGs attention to the >> latest revision of the LISP Introduction draft. >> If you can take a look at this before the meeting in Toronto, that would be >> good. >> Our apologies for the late notice. >> >> Yours, >> Joel >> >> > > Joel, Editors; > > This document contains many recommendations by the editors in bracketed form. > Are the editors looking for a review focused on accepting/rejecting these > comments? > > FWIW at a quick read I’d be willing to accept all (or nearly all) of the > editors suggestions. I will happily review the document either in its > entirety or focus on the editorial comments, or both. > > -Darrel > > > > > > >> -------- Original Message -------- >> Subject: [lisp] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-04.txt >> Date: Wed, 16 Jul 2014 09:40:43 -0700 >> From: [email protected] >> To: [email protected] >> CC: [email protected] >> >> A new Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >> directories. >> This draft is a work item of the Locator/ID Separation Protocol Working >> Group of the IETF. >> >> Title : An Architectural Introduction to the LISP >> Location-Identity Separation System >> Author(s) : D. Saucez, et al >> Filename : draft-ietf-lisp-introduction >> Pages : 59 >> Date : 2014-07-16 >> >> This document is an introductory overview of the Locator/ID >> Separation Protocol, it describes the major concepts and functional >> sub-systems of LISP and the interactions between them. >> >> >> A URL for this Internet-Draft is: >> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-04.txt >> >> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ >> >> Below is the data which will enable a MIME compliant mail reader >> implementation to automatically retrieve the ASCII version of the >> Internet-Draft. >> >> >> >> <draft-ietf-lisp-introduction><Attached Message >> Part.txt>_______________________________________________ >> lisp mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lisp > > _______________________________________________ > lisp mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lisp
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