Hello Albert and Damien, quite a document!
I'm looking forward for a version where your Editor's suggestions are implemented. I agree with the suggestions. What I do like - and hope it will be maintained in future versions - is the lot of references. It's a great read (I regularly get lost in looking up the referenced RFCs ;-) In part II the text sometimes is very detailed - an example is section 13.x: what fields are contained in the messages is described in the particular RFCs and I don't see a gain describing it here again, even briefly. In this sense I support all suggestions that simplify text. From an introduction text I would expect it explains the building blocks like MR, MS, iTR and eTR (to stay with the example of the mapping system) and what messages exist in between. And then a reference to the particular RFCs for details. Nevertheless, overall an interesting read. Regards, Marc On Wed, 16 Jul 2014 12:47:40 -0400, Joel M. Halpern wrote: > The chairs and listed authors are happy to call the WGs attention to the > latest revision of the LISP Introduction draft. > If you can take a look at this before the meeting in Toronto, that would be > good. > Our apologies for the late notice. > > Yours, > Joel > > > -------- Original Message -------- > Subject: [lisp] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-04.txt > Date: Wed, 16 Jul 2014 09:40:43 -0700 > From: [email protected] > To: [email protected] > CC: [email protected] > > A new Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Locator/ID Separation Protocol Working > Group of the IETF. > > Title : An Architectural Introduction to the LISP > Location-Identity Separation System > Author(s) : D. Saucez, et al > Filename : draft-ietf-lisp-introduction > Pages : 59 > Date : 2014-07-16 > > This document is an introductory overview of the Locator/ID > Separation Protocol, it describes the major concepts and functional > sub-systems of LISP and the interactions between them. > > > A URL for this Internet-Draft is: > https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-04.txt > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > Below is the data which will enable a MIME compliant mail reader > implementation to automatically retrieve the ASCII version of the > Internet-Draft. > > > > _______________________________________________ > lisp mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lisp _______________________________________________ lisp mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lisp
