Hi Marc Thanks for your comments, we will indeed keep a long list of references so that the INTRO document gives -some sort of- structure to all the RFCs/WG documents and hence, are easier to read.
We agree with you, we should avoid too many details (the spec already provides them) and explain the main LISP building blocks and how they relate. Albert On Wed, Jul 30, 2014 at 10:28 AM, Marc Binderberger <[email protected]> wrote: > Hello Albert and Damien, > > quite a document! > > I'm looking forward for a version where your Editor's suggestions are > implemented. I agree with the suggestions. > > What I do like - and hope it will be maintained in future versions - is the > lot of references. It's a great read (I regularly get lost in looking up the > referenced RFCs ;-) > > In part II the text sometimes is very detailed - an example is section 13.x: > what fields are contained in the messages is described in the particular RFCs > and I don't see a gain describing it here again, even briefly. In this sense > I support all suggestions that simplify text. From an introduction text I > would expect it explains the building blocks like MR, MS, iTR and eTR (to > stay with the example of the mapping system) and what messages exist in > between. And then a reference to the particular RFCs for details. > > Nevertheless, overall an interesting read. > > > Regards, Marc > > > > > > > > On Wed, 16 Jul 2014 12:47:40 -0400, Joel M. Halpern wrote: >> The chairs and listed authors are happy to call the WGs attention to the >> latest revision of the LISP Introduction draft. >> If you can take a look at this before the meeting in Toronto, that would be >> good. >> Our apologies for the late notice. >> >> Yours, >> Joel >> >> >> -------- Original Message -------- >> Subject: [lisp] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-04.txt >> Date: Wed, 16 Jul 2014 09:40:43 -0700 >> From: [email protected] >> To: [email protected] >> CC: [email protected] >> >> A new Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >> directories. >> This draft is a work item of the Locator/ID Separation Protocol Working >> Group of the IETF. >> >> Title : An Architectural Introduction to the LISP >> Location-Identity Separation System >> Author(s) : D. Saucez, et al >> Filename : draft-ietf-lisp-introduction >> Pages : 59 >> Date : 2014-07-16 >> >> This document is an introductory overview of the Locator/ID >> Separation Protocol, it describes the major concepts and functional >> sub-systems of LISP and the interactions between them. >> >> >> A URL for this Internet-Draft is: >> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-04.txt >> >> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ >> >> Below is the data which will enable a MIME compliant mail reader >> implementation to automatically retrieve the ASCII version of the >> Internet-Draft. >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> lisp mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lisp > > _______________________________________________ > lisp mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lisp _______________________________________________ lisp mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lisp
