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src/detector/detector.cpp
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/7295/#comment25582>

    The comment is good, but it's a run-on sentence (had to read it a few times 
to get it).



src/detector/detector.cpp
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/7295/#comment25583>

    google-glog comes with CHECK_NOTNULL
    
    you can then one-line it, if you like:
    delete CHECK_NOTNULL(watcher);



src/detector/detector.cpp
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/7295/#comment25584>

    ditto



src/detector/detector.cpp
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/7295/#comment25585>

    Maybe it's just me but I find structure makes these big paragraph comments 
easier to read:
    
    // Okay, we didn't prematurally expire the session, so either this
    // detector was contending to be a master or not.
    //   If it was not, we want to run an election.
    //   If it was, either:
    //     1. "We're" still the master (because "we" haven't
    //     yet gotten a session expiration).
    //     2. Someone else was the master and they're still the master.
    //     3. Someone else was the master and someone else still is now the 
master.
    //   Either way, run an election.



src/detector/detector.cpp
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/7295/#comment25586>

    this comment reads better than the other big ones, so maybe it's just 
run-ons that I find hard to immediately grok



src/detector/detector.cpp
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/7295/#comment25587>

    ditto CHECK_NOTNULL



src/detector/detector.cpp
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/7295/#comment25588>

    ditto



src/detector/detector.cpp
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/7295/#comment25589>

    ditto



third_party/libprocess/include/process/timer.hpp
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/7295/#comment25590>

    curious why we called this thunk?


- Ben Mahler


On Sept. 27, 2012, 10:02 p.m., Benjamin Hindman wrote:
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> (Updated Sept. 27, 2012, 10:02 p.m.)
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> Review request for mesos, John Sirois, Vinod Kone, and Ben Mahler.
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> Description
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> See summary (7 of 7).
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> Diffs
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>   src/detector/detector.cpp 0246846 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/7295/diff/
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> Testing
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> make check
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> Thanks,
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> Benjamin Hindman
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