Benoit Claise <bcla...@cisco.com> wrote: > Hi Martin, > > Removed some extra ones on which we agree. > See in line. > > > >>>> - Terminology: > >>>> The following terms are defined in [RFC6241 > >>>> <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6241>]: > >>>> > >>>> ... > >>>> > >>>> o configuration datastore: a configuration datastore is an > >>>> instantiated data tree with configuration data > >>>> > >>>> o datastore: an instantiated data tree > >>>> > >>>> RFC6241 has different definition for "configuration datastore" and > >>>> "datastore". > >>>> I would just provide the pointer to the RFC 6241 definitions. > >>>> If you intend to provide an adapted definition for the YANG mappings, > >>>> then you should say so. > >>> How about: > >>> > >>> OLD: > >>> > >>> o configuration datastore: a configuration datastore is an > >>> instantiated data tree with configuration data > >>> > >>> o datastore: an instantiated data tree > >>> > >>> NEW: > >>> > >>> o configuration datastore: When modelled with YANG, a configuration > >>> datastore is an instantiated data tree with configuration data > >>> > >>> o datastore: When modelled with YANG, an instantiated data tree > >>> > >> This issue is with "The following terms are defined in [RFC6241]", but > >> you re-define those terms.
I don't think it is correct to say that we "re-define" these terms. It sounds like we give the terms a different meaning. I agree that the OLD text gave that impression, but I think the NEW proposed text fixes this. The terms are defined in 6241, and they keep their meaning. We clarify the meaning of two of the terms in a YANG context. > >> So give a warning about the redefinition to the readers. > > Yes, that's what my proposed text does. It says that "datastore" is > > defined in 6241, and when YANG is used, it means the instantiated data > > tree. > OLD: > > The following terms are defined in [RFC6241 > <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6241>]: > > NEW: > > The following terms are defined in [RFC6241 > <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6241>], but re-defined in this > document in YANG context: /martin _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
