Benoit Claise <bcla...@cisco.com> wrote: > Hi Martin, > > Benoit Claise <bcla...@cisco.com> wrote: > >> Hi Martin, > >> > >> Removed some extra ones on which we agree. > >> See in line. > >>>>>> - Terminology: > >>>>>> The following terms are defined in [RFC6241 > >>>>>> <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6241>]: > >>>>>> > >>>>>> ... > >>>>>> > >>>>>> o configuration datastore: a configuration datastore is an > >>>>>> instantiated data tree with configuration data > >>>>>> > >>>>>> o datastore: an instantiated data tree > >>>>>> > >>>>>> RFC6241 has different definition for "configuration datastore" and > >>>>>> "datastore". > >>>>>> I would just provide the pointer to the RFC 6241 definitions. > >>>>>> If you intend to provide an adapted definition for the YANG mappings, > >>>>>> then you should say so. > >>>>> How about: > >>>>> > >>>>> OLD: > >>>>> > >>>>> o configuration datastore: a configuration datastore is an > >>>>> instantiated data tree with configuration data > >>>>> > >>>>> o datastore: an instantiated data tree > >>>>> > >>>>> NEW: > >>>>> > >>>>> o configuration datastore: When modelled with YANG, a > >>>>> configuration > >>>>> datastore is an instantiated data tree with configuration data > >>>>> > >>>>> o datastore: When modelled with YANG, an instantiated data tree > >>>>> > >>>> This issue is with "The following terms are defined in [RFC6241]", but > >>>> you re-define those terms. > > I don't think it is correct to say that we "re-define" these terms. > > It sounds like we give the terms a different meaning. > Playing with words? :-) > > I agree that > > the OLD text gave that impression, but I think the NEW proposed text > > fixes this. > This does not work. > > Reading the terminology ... > > The following terms are defined in [RFC6241 > <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6241>]: > > o configuration datastore: ... > > o datastore: ... > > ... I will not even bother reading the definitions, because I know > them from 6241. > Doing this, I will not spot the subtle "different meaning" you > inserted in the definitions.
Ok, how about moving the specialized-meaning-text to its own paragraph: The following terms are defined in [RFC6241]: o configuration data o configuration datastore o datastore o running configuration datastore o state data When modelled with YANG, a datastore is realized as an instantiated data tree. When modelled with YANG, a configuration datastore is realized as an instantiated data tree with configuration data. /martin _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
