Hi Martin,
Benoit Claise <[email protected]> wrote:
Hi Martin,
Removed some extra ones on which we agree.
See in line.
- Terminology:
The following terms are defined in [RFC6241
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6241>]:
...
o configuration datastore: a configuration datastore is an
instantiated data tree with configuration data
o datastore: an instantiated data tree
RFC6241 has different definition for "configuration datastore" and
"datastore".
I would just provide the pointer to the RFC 6241 definitions.
If you intend to provide an adapted definition for the YANG mappings,
then you should say so.
How about:
OLD:
o configuration datastore: a configuration datastore is an
instantiated data tree with configuration data
o datastore: an instantiated data tree
NEW:
o configuration datastore: When modelled with YANG, a configuration
datastore is an instantiated data tree with configuration data
o datastore: When modelled with YANG, an instantiated data tree
This issue is with "The following terms are defined in [RFC6241]", but
you re-define those terms.
I don't think it is correct to say that we "re-define" these terms.
It sounds like we give the terms a different meaning.
Playing with words? :-)
I agree that
the OLD text gave that impression, but I think the NEW proposed text
fixes this.
This does not work.
Reading the terminology ...
The following terms are defined in [RFC6241
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6241>]:
o configuration datastore: ...
o datastore: ...
... I will not even bother reading the definitions, because I know them
from 6241.
Doing this, I will not spot the subtle "different meaning" you inserted
in the definitions.
Regards, Benoit
The terms are defined in 6241, and they keep their meaning. We
clarify the meaning of two of the terms in a YANG context.
So give a warning about the redefinition to the readers.
Yes, that's what my proposed text does. It says that "datastore" is
defined in 6241, and when YANG is used, it means the instantiated data
tree.
OLD:
The following terms are defined in [RFC6241
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6241>]:
NEW:
The following terms are defined in [RFC6241
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6241>], but re-defined in this
document in YANG context:
/martin
.
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