On 14 Mar 2012, at 01:35, Rob Weir wrote: > > Allowing a few more brushes in there is a great idea.
You've made quite a few edits I see - thanks. With respect, I think you are making it rather verbose and losing the easy-to-read bulleted approach. You are also introducing a style that external readers will consider to be interpreting the facts. One of the key starting points was to avoid that and I suggest you seek another author you respect (obviously not me!) to help preserve the concise style the rest of us were using. Thanks S.
