David, I find the new diagrams easy to read. Rick and Dan Carter had some good comments on maintaining the style and possible indent for multiple choice items - and I think those were also good ones. (I prefer seeing multiple choices in BNF notation, but BNF can be just as bad as the railroad tracks for some people.) Mark's comments on a "small amount of descriptive text" is also a good idea.
I think the "box" needs to stay, as I have discovered that changing fonts does not always give you the desired results - especially when a Operating System, Browser, or PDF reader substitutes the specified font for one that is "more readably" available.)... ..but the box as displayed in my browser has a fair amount of "white space" above the text line, and almost none below the text line. I know you don't have a lot of control, but maybe a box that is 1.5 lines high, with the text vertically centered but make it a little more readable. /s/ Bill Turner, wb4alm ------------------------------------------------------------------------- This SF.Net email is sponsored by the Moblin Your Move Developer's challenge Build the coolest Linux based applications with Moblin SDK & win great prizes Grand prize is a trip for two to an Open Source event anywhere in the world http://moblin-contest.org/redirect.php?banner_id=100&url=/ _______________________________________________ Oorexx-devel mailing list [email protected] https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/oorexx-devel
