On Sunday 18 March 2007 19:38, Timothy Normand Miller wrote: > Latest revisions: > > http://www.traversaltech.com/ogd1_press/ogd1-graphics.pdf
* There is a much nicer image over on http://nova.student.utwente.nl/~lourens/gfx/opengraphics/press/ IIRC, these press images were mirrored on the TT site as well. * In the spec sheet, the memory bandwidth values lack a unit (MB/s?) * Do we need physical dimensions in millimetres as well? > http://www.traversaltech.com/ogd1_press/ogd1%20publicity%202.pdf * Xilinx, Spartan and Lattice are trademarks. We definitely want to acknowledge them properly in a press release, or these companies would have to sue us or at least have their lawyers send us a nastygram (or risk losing their trademark). It also looks more professional. The "showcase" image I made has the following (with actual TM signs instead, but I can't seem to type them easily): - Xilinx® SpartanTM 3S4000 - LatticeTM XP10 At the bottom, there should be something like "Xilinx and Spartan are trademarks or registered trademarks of Xilinx, Inc. Lattice is a trademark of Lattice Semiconductor Corporation." Yes, I know I'm suffering from broken-recordness on this :-). However, there is enough FUD about free software developers not respecting "intellectual property" out there already, we don't need them to add free design hardware developers to that list (although they probably will anyway). * "Given the high cost of hardware development, the Open Graphics Project cannot function as many loose-knit Free Software projects. They have developed legal frameworks to assist in the legal and financial aspects of the project." That should be rephrased I think. I understand what you're trying to say, but you're not making it easy :-). * At the end of "Licensing", "the all remaining software" Typographical notes: I think the spacing between the headers and the following text is too big. Perhaps I've been looking at LaTeX output too much lately, but somewhat wider margins and filled-out text would look better. I'm not sure this is even relevant since I'm not sure in what format this stuff is going to be distributed. Lourens
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