http://www.elvum.net/gallery/paw/kw_gmac3
It's interesting, what was it's purpose, near macro experiment? film experiment? Record shot? Graphic interest? Your intentions are a little unclear so it's difficult to provide constructive comment.
My intention was to take a nice photo of a tomato using a reversing ring. :-) The film was just what happened to be in my camera at the time, but don't let that stop you from saying that a different choice of film (or equipment) could have improved the photo, if that's what you think.
In general if I post a link to a photo for comment, I'm hoping that people will tell me what they would have done differently to make it better in their eyes. Assuming they can see any merit in it in the first place... ;-)
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