On 10-10-15 5:55 AM, Walter Gilbert wrote:
 Hi all,

Well, I had my very first photo shoot today. All things considered, I think it went fairly well. I did get some good shots, a couple of great shots, and many that will wind up being salvageable. Here are a few shots to give a reasonable approximation:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/sets/72157625167892920/

Nothing went as planned, and I hadn't the foggiest notion what I was doing. But, somehow, I managed not to lose my friend (Megan, the model) -- at least until she's seen the images. There are a few that have clunky backgrounds that I intend to obscure at some point. Beyond that, does anyone have any hits or tips that I might use to make the images look better?

Comments, critiques, and advice are, of course, welcome.

Best,

Walt

My faves from this set are 5257 and 5369, the jeep window shot.

I get the impression that your scenes were mostly lit with tungsten (incandescent) lights, perhaps bare or likely with their shades still on. In some of them I can see window light added in.

That shininess issue on your model's face is largely due to the small light source that you're using as your main light. My advice for your next shoot is to make your light sources larger and so softer. You need to use some sort of diffusion between your small (point-like) light source and your subject. If you can afford a shoot-through umbrella ($25) and a stand, get one. Otherwise you can get a nice effect by just hanging a white sheet or sheer curtain material up. You'll lose a stop of light so you'll need to compensate for that.

Where window daylight enters the scene it appears blue (eg LHS of 5257). To avoid that you'd need to gel the entire window with orange. You could just hang an orange sheet over the window instead.

You'd do very well in this situation with some flash. A single flash with a CTO gel through a shoot-through umbrella together with the incandescent lamps in the room could get you great results.

Anyway, great first attempt, Walt. You are very lucky to have such an attractive and keen model to work with. An excellent learning experience!

-bmw

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