Stan,
Adroit critique.  You missed the flash player :-(
Regards,  Bob S.

On Fri, Feb 3, 2012 at 3:11 PM, Stan Halpin <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> On Feb 3, 2012, at 2:45 AM, John Coyle wrote:
>
>> The link is to a small gallery (4 shots) taken in Bologna, last year.  The 
>> first image is
>> good enough as a shot of a bunch of university students on a big 
>> (graduation) day for
>> them, but on processing the image I thought there might be three images 
>> contained in it
>> that could stand-alone.
>> Was I right?
>>
>> http://www.members.iinet.net.au/[email protected]/Inclusions/index.html
>>
>>
>> John Coyle
>> Brisbane, Australia
>>
>
> I agree that you have three subordinate images buried in the larger. The full 
> scene is good enough, but really too busy; there are at least three different 
> areas of interest! (:-)>
> Of the three narrower scenes, the third is ok. But of course the context is 
> lost.
>
> In some ideal world, a place I seldom have a chance to spend much time in, 
> you would be able to discard all four images - the full scene and its 
> piece-parts. Then you would move to the next frame on the film roll and 
> delightedly examine a slightly different image. This other image would show 
> the full scene, but the camera view would be shifted to the right a few 
> notches. The trio standing in discussion would be the focal point, and all of 
> the actors in motion around them would be contrasting minor players in the 
> scene.
>
> stan
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