I ike the other one much better... This is a good newspaper /information shot... but the sky is what I like most,not the ugly foreground buildings and those things on working ports that lift stuff off of ships...
 geometry wise it works... I jsut don't find it very appealing
ann

On 2/14/2016 1:48 PM, Larry Colen wrote:


Boris Liberman wrote:
That day the weather in Haifa was very photogenic...

http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2016/02/2016-05-haifa-bay.html

Be brutal and honest :-).

In general, I like it. It works well, as Dan said, in black and white. I have two niggles with it. The first one is that the bright clouds look a bit blown out. The other is that with the ship centered on the left side the composition feels a bit "off". I realize that both the clouds and the city at the bottom are part of what you were aiming to get in the photo, but another crop, without so much of the clouds at the top might work better.





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