Larry, this is quite interesting what you say...
1. I deliberately did not max out the contrast, so at to keep all (both
dark and bright) areas of the frame within limits and to prevent
saturation. According to my LightRoom, I have minimal dark saturation
(bottom left) and no bright saturation whatsoever...
2. I see your point about different crop. I was really attracted by the
bright clouds just on to of the towns across the bay and I thought that
although the top half and bottom half of the frame could be considered
as separate pictures, they kind of play together. Again, not arguing,
merely trying to *voice* my reasoning.
Boris
On 2/14/2016 20:48, Larry Colen wrote:
Boris Liberman wrote:
That day the weather in Haifa was very photogenic...
http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2016/02/2016-05-haifa-bay.html
Be brutal and honest :-).
In general, I like it. It works well, as Dan said, in black and
white. I have two niggles with it. The first one is that the bright
clouds look a bit blown out. The other is that with the ship centered
on the left side the composition feels a bit "off". I realize that
both the clouds and the city at the bottom are part of what you were
aiming to get in the photo, but another crop, without so much of the
clouds at the top might work better.
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