Nice to see some progress on that front.
I checked a bit and just a remark: pay attention to the coherent of word uppercasing in titles.

A quick tour of Pharo

vs.

A Quick tout of Pharo.

In PBE we do not use uppercase in title except for names.
I read fast the QuickTour and fix them all.

Also use '' '' for italic. Because this is nice to have stress in the text.
Keep pushing.

Stef

On 1/6/14 17:54, kilon alios wrote:
So I have finished the second chapter , but, there is a sub section about Squeaksource which I don't think many people use anymore , will you keep this as it is ? Cause I was thinking maybe deleting that part and talk instead about Smalltalkhub.

For the time being I have ported Squeaksource part as it is.


On Sat, May 24, 2014 at 11:44 AM, kilon alios <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

    Finished Chapter 3 , no errors or warnings reporting with pdf
    generation.

    I am moving to Chapter 2 now, which for some strange reason I
    skipped.


    On Thu, May 22, 2014 at 11:19 AM, kilon alios
    <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

        oh yes I completely missed the "examples" option. Great ! One
        thing less to worry about , thanks Ben :)


        On Thu, May 22, 2014 at 1:42 AM, Ben Coman
        <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

            kilon alios wrote:
            In section 1.9  page 18 there is this text

            "At other times you may have a good idea that a method
            exists, but will have no idea what it might be called.
            The method finder can still help! For example, suppose
            that you would like to find a method that turns a string
            into upper case, for example, it would translate 'eureka'
            into 'EUREKA'.

            The method finder will suggest a method that does what
            you want.8

            An asterisk at the beginning of a line in the right pane
            of the method finder indicates that this method is the
            one that was actually used to obtain the requested
            result. So, the asterisk in front of String asUppercase
            lets us know that the method asUppercase defined on the
            class String was executed and returned the result we
            wanted. The methods that do not have an asterisk are just
            the other methods that have the same name as the ones
            that returned the expected result. So
            Character»asUppercase was not executed on our example,
            because 'eureka' is not a Character object.

            You can also use the method finder for methods with
            arguments; for example, if you are looking for a method
            that will find the greatest common factor of two
            integers, you might try 25. 35. 5 as an example. You can
            also give the method finder multiple examples to narrow
            the search space; the help text in the bottom pane
            explains how. "

            I tried " 'eureka' . 'EUREKA '" and the other suggestion
            it does not seem to work , should I remove this section ?

            It works for me...
            * World > Tools > Finder
            * Type...   'eureka' . 'EUREKA'
            * Change [Selectors] to [Examples]






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