Thanks Stef , I will try to take account all you mentioned from now on to anything I port. I used spaces because it makes it much easier for me to read.
I have not added more screenshots because you told me you wanted less. Obviously less screenshots is less work for me. I have tried to add all the basic ones like system browser, inspector etc. In any case I like to note here that my work need a lot of proof reading. I am fully aware there will be problems with my work and I don't read line by line everything I port because that would be extremely time consuming and would slow me down severely. But I do always make sure the pdf renders properly and the text looks readable. So please if you find any problems with the pdf/html , either fix it yourselves or if you dont have access to github / dont have the time to fix it , please report here and I will fix it for you. Whats the verdict with the Squeksource section ? Do I covert it to a SmalltalkHub section or do I continue to chapter 4 ? "Thanks kilon. Thats an important effort. I would vote for changing it to SmalltalkHub. The Squeaksource home page says its disabled creation of new projects. " well last time I checked the old Squeaksource was dead, there was something like Squeaksource3 that can be found here that allows the creation of new projects and I think its what squeakers use for their projects http://ss3.gemstone.com/ but I have not used it since I left Squeak for Pharo a year ago. I dont have an issues making a similar size section about Smalltalkhub , I agree its the most sensible solution but I would like to check it our first with Stef and the rest of the team because I know its extra work for people doing the translations and such. On Sun, Jun 1, 2014 at 9:13 PM, stepharo <steph...@free.fr> wrote: > I also fixed > > kjhjkhjh . -> lkjlkjklj. > > lkjkl , kkklj -> lkjkl, kkklj > > there is no space because diacritics in english so > > Pharo ? -> Pharo? > > And I suggest to add some screen shots in the tour on pharo. > > > I converted also extra bold into == == because code should be in == == > > > I think that we should have a special tag for the "exercises" right now I > put a bullet. > Stef > >
