Adar Dembo has posted comments on this change. ( 
http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/13820 )

Change subject: [docs] update the upgrade documentation
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Patch Set 1:

(7 comments)

Could you push this change to a github fork so we can also review the rendered 
form of the documentation?

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13820/1/docs/installation.adoc
File docs/installation.adoc:

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13820/1/docs/installation.adoc@635
PS1, Line 635: . Prepare the software.
This recommendation is only necessary if you're actually building from source. 
If not, it doesn't make sense. Could you condition it behind that?


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13820/1/docs/installation.adoc@636
PS1, Line 636: building
build


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13820/1/docs/installation.adoc@638
PS1, Line 638: big
large


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13820/1/docs/installation.adoc@645
PS1, Line 645:   - Rolling restart `kudu-tserver` and the gflag above should be 
reset after every rebooting.
Could you provide specific instructions for restoring the default gflag value?

Also, when referring to kudu-master and kudu-tserver _processes_ (as opposed to 
binary names), no need to surround with backticks. Same with tserver below.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13820/1/docs/installation.adoc@645
PS1, Line 645: rebooting
reboot


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13820/1/docs/installation.adoc@648
PS1, Line 648: . Restore the original gflags.
Likewise, this duplicates the suggestion on L645.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13820/1/docs/installation.adoc@650
PS1, Line 650: WARNING: To prevent the restarted `tserver` from being evicted 
from the cluster, the gflag should be reset.
Could you roll this into the rolling restart instructions? No need to duplicate 
the same suggestion.



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