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docs/authorization.md (line 12)
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    I'd avoid passive voice here: "The next section explores the concepts 
necessary to successfully configure the local authorizer". Personally I'd opt 
for removing the rest of the paragraph.
    
    Typos: "sections", "finalized", "discussion".
    
    Personally I would opt for using italics around "local authorizer" only the 
first time the term is used, and then not using italics for subsequent uses.



docs/authorization.md (line 14)
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    "The final section briefly discusses how to implement a custom authorizer."



docs/authorization.md (line 462)
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    I'd move this section up before the examples.


- Neil Conway


On May 9, 2016, 8:49 a.m., Alexander Rojas wrote:
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> (Updated May 9, 2016, 8:49 a.m.)
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> Review request for mesos, Adam B, Alexander Rukletsov, Greg Mann, and Neil 
> Conway.
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> Bugs: MESOS-4785
>     https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-4785
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> Repository: mesos
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> Description
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> The API of the authorization has been changing constantly over the
> last few versions. This patch attempts to update the documentation to
> the those changes into account.
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> Diffs
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>   docs/authorization.md 0db5c345b3239814b3b9d2e8a87601ff69d0f869 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/46501/diff/
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> Testing
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> Thanks,
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> Alexander Rojas
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