Disclaimer
Ranma 1/2 was created by Takahashi Rumiko, and anyone who doesn't
already know this won't understand this story anyway. Bleach was
created by Tite Kubo; you don't really need to have seen Bleach to
understand this fic, but just so you know, anything not Ranma related in
here was
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I can't read your submission in its current format. It is all
one huge paragraph.
If you can fix that, I'll give it a try.
June
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I've been reading all the comments on the rather blatant, and frankly
incredibly weak, infodump which comprised most of this chapter.
I was already well aware of how badly this read. It's one of those cases
where you have to get the thing done, but finding a way to do it that
doesn't read
Don't be too hard on yourself, I happen to think you pulled off
Chapter 5 rather well.
On 8/26/07, The Eternal Lost Lurker [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
I've been reading all the comments on the rather blatant, and frankly
incredibly weak, infodump which comprised most of this chapter.
I was
Don't be too hard on yourself, I happen to think you pulled off
Chapter 5 rather well.
No, I honestly half-assed it. And I was well aware I was half-assing it,
because I did the exact same BS in the first draft that only a month ago a
friend and I were bitching about JKR doing in the final
Well there's a few things that could do with some improvement. The interaction
between Naruto and Zel needs some refinement early on, but I'm not eloquent
enough to be able to explain how without basically doing it for you. The fact
Zel's blue should cause a little more reaction, this isn't
into…before you go there
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Sorry. Once again, this is all one paragraph, and, therefore, unreadable.
Joel
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Okay, your first mistake? You don't need to *explain* your
story. Let
your STORY explain ITSELF.
I'm not even sure people read stories
anymore
without knowing at least something about it.
On this list, they do. That is part of the point of the list.
This may be a radically different
You might want to try formatting the story as a .txt file before you try
to send it. Whatever you're using to format this is *not* working.
Oberon wrote:
The condensed version is that Naruto learns a fewSlayers verse spells and now
everyone thinks he'sa genius hiding as an idiot. Of course,
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