PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On Behalf Of John M. Bennett Sent: 17 November 2005 21:07 To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Subject: FLUXLIST: Jack A. Withers Smote poemSmote sent me this, seems
he's trying out my recent "sonnet" form:Whip With the sardines of your
I was neglecting that particular meter, fine and
noble as it is
Roger, shame on you! Water meter it is too. Smells nice as well, perhaps it's
a scenty meter?
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Sent: 20 November 2005 02:13
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Subject: Re: RE: FLUXLIST: Jack A. Withers Smote poem
using:
iambic, anapestic, trochaic, dactylic, spondaic, pyrrhic
and forgoing:
amphi anti bacchi, chori
crete and epi
: FLUXLIST: Jack A. Withers Smote poem
A masterful analysis
For me it has become another poem entirely
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From: suse [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Date: Saturday, November 19, 2005 9:13 pm
Subject: Re: RE: FLUXLIST: Jack A. Withers Smote poem
using:
iambic, anapestic, trochaic, dactylic, spondaic, pyrrhic
and forgoing:
amphi anti
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From: suse [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Date: Sunday, November 20, 2005 2:07 pm
Subject: Re: RE: FLUXLIST: Jack A. Withers Smote poem
another W.S.
XXIX.
When, in disgrace with fortune and men's
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From: Roger Stevens [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Date: Friday, November 18, 2005 1:07 pm
Subject: RE: FLUXLIST: Jack A. Withers Smote poem
Okay - the two short lines are released to float amidst the three
quatrains. fine
And the ends of the lines rhyme, in a relaxed way
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From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
On Behalf Of JOHN BENNETT
Sent: 19 November 2005 14:16
To: FLUXLIST@scribble.com
Subject: Re: RE: FLUXLIST: Jack A. Withers Smote poem
These are Johnee sonnets, written in Johnee meter etc!
John
Dr. John M. Bennett
Curator
BENNETT
Sent: 19 November 2005 14:16
To: FLUXLIST@scribble.com
Subject: Re: RE: FLUXLIST: Jack A. Withers Smote
poem
These are Johnee sonnets, written in Johnee meter
etc!
John
Dr. John M. Bennett
Curator, Avant Writing Collection
Rare Books Manuscripts Library
The Ohio State University
: Saturday, November 19, 2005 5:11 PM
Subject: RE: RE: FLUXLIST: Jack A. Withers Smote poem
Neglecting the meter will not affect your gas supply
but poems will be charged for every therm used .
Therm more than others.
Michael
--- Roger Stevens [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
Of course
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Subject: FLUXLIST: Jack A. Withers
Smote poem
Smote sent me this, seems
he's trying out my recent sonnet form:
Whip
With the sardines of your neighbors
those very pretty plastic balls like
hosers on the shore strong models of your
jungle verbiage in the cellphone lake
Lick every
]] On Behalf Of John M.
Bennett
Sent: 17 November 2005 21:07
To: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Subject: FLUXLIST: Jack A. Withers Smote poem
Smote sent me this, seems he's trying out my recent sonnet
form:
Whip
With the sardines of your neighbors
those very pretty plastic balls like
hosers on the shore
Aging in Bush's America will do that to a guy...On Nov 18, 2005, at 9:15 AM, John M. Bennett wrote: Bennett is getting reactionary perhaps?
To: FLUXLIST@scribble.com
Subject: RE: FLUXLIST: Jack A.
Withers Smote poem
Uh, it is a sonnet unless
you define sonnet in strictly narrow terms, as being only a
Shakespearean or Petrarchan. This is one of
Bennett's sonnet forms, as seen by Smote. But it's got the 14 lines, 3
quatrains, and a couplet
Smote sent me this, seems he's trying out my recent sonnet
form:
Whip
With the sardines of your neighbors
those very pretty plastic balls like
hosers on the shore strong models of your
jungle verbiage in the cellphone lake
Lick every entity
Organ hand and legless jokes some
jackoff zoo
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