Re: [Gen-art] [EAI] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-eai-imap-utf8-07

2009-09-03 Thread Pete Resnick
normative reference: RFC 1341 (Obsoleted by RFC 1521) According to authors this reference is intentional. It is. Thanks David (and Alexey). pr -- Pete Resnick http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/ Qualcomm Incorporated - Direct phone: (858)651-4478, Fax: (858)651-1102

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-gellens-mime-bucket-bis-05.txt

2011-07-10 Thread Pete Resnick
David/Randy/Per, I haven't seen any reply to this message. IESG review is coming up on Thursday morning. Please respond to these issues well before then. pr On 7/5/11 9:53 AM, Miguel A. Garcia wrote: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft. For

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-gellens-mime-bucket-bis-06.txt

2011-07-28 Thread Pete Resnick
On 7/28/11 4:58 PM, David Singer wrote: On Jul 28, 2011, at 13:48 , Sean Turner wrote: I thought we'd settled on updated the ones that are already published so that implementers will more easily be able to find the parameter. Yup, my dropped ball. I should have communicated with

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-gellens-mime-bucket-bis-06.txt

2011-07-28 Thread Pete Resnick
On 7/28/11 5:57 PM, David Singer wrote: I linked the affected RFCs in the IANA considerations section. I am happy to edit the XML so that the document reflects this -- do you know how to edit the XML to say this? If you feel like making the change, in the rfc directive, add

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-eai-rfc5335bis-12

2011-10-20 Thread Pete Resnick
Your initial suspicion was correct: It is a typo. Impressive how many folks can miss something so simple. I'll put it in a note to the RFC Editor. pr On 10/20/11 5:48 AM, Miguel A. Garcia wrote: Yes, I interpret the same. But having found no motivation for the reduction of 10 octets, I just

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-eai-rfc5335bis-12

2011-10-20 Thread Pete Resnick
On 10/20/11 6:59 AM, Miguel A. Garcia wrote: But even if it is a typo, the text makes no sense. It says: Section 2.1.1 of [RFC5322] limits lines to 998 characters and recommends that the lines be restricted to only 78 characters. This specification changes the former limit to 988

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-davis-t-langtag-ext-06

2011-11-22 Thread Pete Resnick
Wait for other changes. This is strictly editorial. On 11/18/11 9:44 AM, Mark Davis ☕ wrote: Sounds good, I can make that change, and search for other isolate t's. Pete, should I wait for other comments, or go ahead and make and post that change? Mark /— Il meglio è l’inimico del bene —/ /

Re: [Gen-art] [spfbis] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-spfbis-experiment-09.txt

2012-06-09 Thread Pete Resnick
Brian, On 6/7/12 8:28 AM, Brian E Carpenter wrote: S Moonesamy wrote: Brian Carpenter wrote: Also, RFC4406 states that Sending domains MAY publish either or both formats (i.e. spf1 or spf2.0). That being so, I would ideally expect to see nine rows in the results table: SPF RR only,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-behave-lsn-requirements-07

2012-07-17 Thread Pete Resnick
On 7/3/12 7:51 AM, Eggert, Lars wrote: On Jul 3, 2012, at 14:24, Alexey Melnikov wrote: I found it is to be odd to have a requirements document as a BCP, but I am sure you can sort the right status out with IESG. +1 I fail to see why Informational wouldn't be the better status.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-behave-lsn-requirements-07

2012-07-17 Thread Pete Resnick
On 7/17/12 5:14 PM, John C Klensin wrote: --On Tuesday, July 17, 2012 13:57 -0500 Pete Resnick presn...@qualcomm.com wrote: Perhaps I'm just being contrarian today, but I *do* think this document should be BCP and not Informational. It is not a requirements document in the sense

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-eai-rfc5721bis-07,

2012-09-21 Thread Pete Resnick
On 9/18/12 8:45 PM, Ben Campbell wrote: Nits/editorial comments: -- IDNits has some complaints; please check. They were checked. -- The abstract should mention that this obsoletes 5721 It does. -- section 2.1, 2nd paragraph: The character encoding format of maildrops may not

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-eai-rfc5721bis-07,

2012-09-21 Thread Pete Resnick
On 9/21/12 10:23 AM, Pete Resnick wrote: -- The abstract should mention that this obsoletes 5721 It does. Sorry. You said abstract, not intro. Got it. pr -- Pete Resnickhttp://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/ Qualcomm Incorporated - Direct phone: (858)651-4478, Fax: (858)651-1102

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-salgueiro-vcarddav-kind-device-06

2012-11-30 Thread Pete Resnick
On 11/30/12 8:50 AM, Vijay K. Gurbani wrote: OLD: ...Working Group defined values of individual, org, group, and location for the KIND property. Additionally, [RFC6473] has defined a value of application for the KIND property to represent software applications. During working group

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-repute-model-07

2013-08-21 Thread Pete Resnick
As per a suggestion in another thread: Would you also say that this draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard? This is more architectural overview than protocol per-se, but I do think it is necessary to the understanding of the other protocol documents (hence it is a normative

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-resnick-on-consensus-05

2013-10-27 Thread Pete Resnick
On 10/11/13 11:27 AM, Russ Housley wrote: Major issues: Section 4 says: ... members of any given working group ... Working groups do not have members; they have participants. Please reword to avoid confusion on this point. Done. Minor issues: Section 4 says that humming should be the

Re: [Gen-art] [Jcardcal] Genart LC review: draft-ietf-jcardcal-jcal-09

2014-03-20 Thread Pete Resnick
On 3/20/14 5:20 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: (This may be more than a nit): In the ABNF in section 3.6.5, where is the implementer supposed to go to find the definition of 'zone'? (Or the other production names?) I think _this_ chunk of ABNF (as opposed to that compiled in the appendix) is intended

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review: draft-mcdonald-ipps-uri-scheme-17

2014-12-02 Thread Pete Resnick
On 12/2/14 11:20 AM, Barry Leiba wrote: When you suggest saying more, are you suggesting saying more in the document? I mostly meant the writeup - I expect there will be IESG folks with the same questions I had. I can do that, sure. This document updates: ...

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-json-text-sequence-09

2014-12-07 Thread Pete Resnick
On 12/5/14 4:38 PM, Barry Leiba wrote: Hi, David. One note on your review: idnits didn't like the reference to RFC 20 for ASCII: ** Downref: Normative reference to an Unknown state RFC: RFC 20 RFC 5234 (ABNF) uses this, which looks like a better reference: [US-ASCII] American

Re: [Gen-art] [aqm] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-aqm-fq-implementation-02

2015-10-22 Thread Pete Resnick
You missed the Zhang reference in 2.2.5. Otherwise fine. pr On 22 Oct 2015, at 11:45, Fred Baker (fred) wrote: See attached. Sorry for the oversight. On Oct 22, 2015, at 12:09 PM, Pete Resnick <presn...@qti.qualcomm.com> wrote: All of the changes you made look fine. You c

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-aqm-fq-implementation-02

2015-10-22 Thread Pete Resnick
, Pete Resnick <presn...@qti.qualcomm.com> wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Fo

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-aqm-fq-implementation-02

2015-10-06 Thread Pete Resnick
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-aqm-fq-implementation-02 Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review Date: 2015-10-6 IETF LC End Date: 2015-10-15 IESG Telechat date: 2015-10-22 Summary: This document is in fine shape and is generally ready for publication (caveat some

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-grow-route-leak-problem-definition-04

2016-03-21 Thread Pete Resnick
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-grow-route-leak-problem-definition-04 Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review Date: 2016-03-21 IETF LC End Date: 2016-03-28 Summary: This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in this review. Major issues: None.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-bradner-rfc3979bis-08

2016-03-31 Thread Pete Resnick
more comfortable. pr -- Pete Resnick <http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualcomm Technologies, Inc. - +1 (858)651-4478___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-bradner-rfc3979bis-08

2016-03-29 Thread Pete Resnick
and how it can be prevented in the future. Please, leave it short, with either the short correction at the top from either Brian or myself. pr -- Pete Resnick <http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualcomm Technologies, Inc. - +1 (858)651-4478_

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-grow-route-leak-problem-definition-04

2016-04-20 Thread Pete Resnick
done making the changes, should I upload a new version using the IETF submission tool or should I simply email the .txt or .xml only to you/Gen-art team? Thanks. Sriram -Original Message- From: Sriram, Kotikalapudi (Fed) Sent: Wednesday, March 30, 2016 6:02 PM To: Pete Resnick <pr

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ospf-sbfd-discriminator-04

2016-04-18 Thread Pete Resnick
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ospf-sbfd-discriminator-04 Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review Date: 2016-04-18 IETF LC End Date: 2016-04-26 IESG Telechat date: 2016-05-05 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. Major issues: None

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tram-turn-mobility-03

2016-08-08 Thread Pete Resnick
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-tram-turn-mobility-03 Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review Date: 2016-08-08 IETF LC End Date: 2016-08-11 IESG Telechat date: Unknown Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has some minor issues and nits that

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tram-turn-mobility-03

2016-08-09 Thread Pete Resnick
te it), I would suggest simply changing it to something like: "Note: There is no guarantee that the fields in the ticket are going to be decodable to a client, and therefore attempts by a client to examine the ticket are unlikely to be useful." pr -- Pete Resnick <http://www.qualcomm.com/

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07

2017-02-03 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07

2017-02-07 Thread Pete Resnick
0010? If so, why is that? For any particular administrative purpose it could be possible to set it to a different value, but that shouldn’t be done. Well, it doesn't say that shouldn't be done, but it probably doesn't need to say anything about local configurations. pr -- Pete Resnick <http://www

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07

2017-02-08 Thread Pete Resnick
not to say anything on that. Thanks Daniele From: Pete Resnick [mailto:presn...@qti.qualcomm.com] Sent: martedì 7 febbraio 2017 18:05 To: Daniele Ceccarelli <daniele.ceccare...@ericsson.com> Cc: Jari Arkko <jari.ar...@piuha.net>; gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext@

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-15

2017-02-02 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07

2017-02-06 Thread Pete Resnick
LSP, but merely as the way to express the supported frequency range." I'm ok with dropping the sentence. I think dropping the sentence would make the most sense. Thank you Daniele Thanks for considering my suggested changes. pr -Original Message- From: Jari Arkko [mailto:jari

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-08

2017-02-10 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-08

2017-02-12 Thread Pete Resnick
, then that's a MUST. As I said before, I'm someone who doesn't like putting in MUSTs and SHOULDs (I've even written protocol documents where they never appear), but if you really mean "required" or "required unless you know what you're doing", I see no harm in put

[Gen-art] GenART post-telechat comment on draft-ietf-tram-turn-mobility-08

2016-09-06 Thread Pete Resnick
at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-tram-turn-mobility-03 Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review Date: 2016-09-06 IESG Telechat date: 2016-09-01 Summary: This is an odd post-telechat review, but I think the draft has gone from "Ready" to &quo

Re: [Gen-art] GenART post-telechat comment on draft-ietf-tram-turn-mobility-08

2016-09-07 Thread Pete Resnick
use the refresh request in 5766." Do I have that right? If so, the paragraph could use a rewrite; it's not the MUST and the MUST NOT that are the problem. Anyway, I am not wedded to keeping the MUST as long as the MUST NOT prevents the sending of a packet that is certain to be rejected.

Re: [Gen-art] GenART post-telechat comment on draft-ietf-tram-turn-mobility-08

2016-09-07 Thread Pete Resnick
7 Sep 2016, at 2:24, Stephen Farrell wrote: Hi Pete, On 06/09/16 16:55, Pete Resnick wrote: However, I believe Suresh was incorrect in suggesting the first "MUST", and it should be removed. There is no harm being prevented here. "If a client wants X, it MUST send Y" is abs

Re: [Gen-art] GenART post-telechat comment on draft-ietf-tram-turn-mobility-08

2016-09-09 Thread Pete Resnick
Request. If that's not what you meant, you should probably clarify. pr -- Pete Resnick <http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualcomm Technologies, Inc. - +1 (858)651-4478___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Review for draft-ietf-lisp-crypto-09

2016-10-12 Thread Pete Resnick
://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Document: draft-ietf-lisp-crypto-09 Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review Date: 2016-10-12 IETF LC End Date: 2016-10-04 IESG Telechat date: 2016-10-13 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC Though this is not an area of expertise for me

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17

2017-03-15 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-encryption-encoding-08

2017-04-05 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-dh-group-exchange-05

2017-07-25 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-oam-usecase-06

2017-06-28 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-oam-usecase-06

2017-06-29 Thread Pete Resnick
et the full scrutiny of a standards-track document. Regards, Ruediger Cheers, pr -Ursprüngliche Nachricht- Von: Pete Resnick [mailto:presn...@qti.qualcomm.com] Gesendet: Mittwoch, 28. Juni 2017 20:31 An: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: spr...@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-spring-o

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netmod-yang-model-classification-06

2017-05-10 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-yang-model-classification-07

2017-05-22 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

2017-09-19 Thread Pete Resnick
/ organization / path / summary / supersedes / user-agent / xref optional-field /=newsfields pr -- Pete Resnick <http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qu

Re: [Gen-art] 答复: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06

2017-08-24 Thread Pete Resnick
from having useful information. :-) Yes, this document registers it, but really what the implementer is going to need is this document *and* 5640, so I see no particular harm in putting both references in the registry, and it's probably useful. pr -- Pete Resnick <http://www.qualcomm.

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06

2017-08-21 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06

2017-08-21 Thread Pete Resnick
On 21 Aug 2017, at 10:58, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote: Hi Pete, On 8/21/17, 11:40 AM, "Pete Resnick" <presn...@qti.qualcomm.com> wrote: Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dcrup-dkim-crypto-12

2018-06-11 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-11

2018-06-19 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-11

2018-01-29 Thread Pete Resnick
BOF" can be referred by RFC 6771 (also include in Informational References) 5. section 3.2.3 - unless there is a special reason I suggest to delete the double-dashes before and after -- or at an acceptable -- 6. Section 4.6: s/The meetings budget is managed by the IAD/The IAD manages t

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-extra-imap-objectid-06

2018-07-27 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-extra-imap-objectid-03

2018-07-14 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-13

2018-09-05 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-07

2018-04-16 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

Re: [Gen-art] [ippm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-09.txt

2018-04-23 Thread Pete Resnick
Thanks Mahesh. Looks great. pr On 23 Apr 2018, at 11:54, Mahesh Jethanandani wrote: Tom/Pete, We believe this version of the draft addresses your comments. Thanks. On Apr 23, 2018, at 9:48 AM, internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote: A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-11

2018-06-20 Thread Pete Resnick
Hi Mahesh, Trimming a bit: On 20 Jun 2018, at 0:36, Mahesh Jethanandani wrote: 3.1 - s/The test session name that MUST be identical/The test session name, which MUST be identical (Unless you mean something really weird that I don't think you mean. If you don't see the difference, then trust

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases-19

2018-10-18 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-26

2018-10-18 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-segment-routing-extensions-18

2018-11-16 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases-18

2018-10-04 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases-18

2018-10-07 Thread Pete Resnick
or is fine, and they'll be able to make it all consistent across the sections. And they're very good about avoiding breaking meanings when they do their edits. Thanks again for your valuable review input, and please let me know if the above resolutions make sense to you. Best, Ethan (as edi

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-15

2018-09-19 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Preliminary Qs for Genart review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases

2018-09-24 Thread Pete Resnick
Hi Lou, I've got a preliminary question about draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases that isn't answered in the intro to the document or in your shepherd writeup. I've Cced the WG just to make sure they're in the loop, and I've Cced the gen-art list and the responsible AD just in case Deborah or any of

Re: [Gen-art] [Detnet] Preliminary Qs for Genart review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases

2018-09-24 Thread Pete Resnick
that's in my editorial comments in the review. Thanks to you and others for the explanations. pr On 9/24/2018 11:43 AM, Pete Resnick wrote: Hi Lou, I've got a preliminary question about draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases that isn't answered in the intro to the document or in your shepherd writeup

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-segment-routing-extensions-19

2018-12-03 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-segment-routing-extensions-19

2018-12-03 Thread Pete Resnick
think it's highly unlikely that she (or anyone on the IESG) would balk at this point in history. Thanks for your (and Peter's) quick replies to these reviews. pr -- Pete Resnick http://www.episteme.net/ All connections to the world are tenuous at best

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpls-seamless-integ-05

2018-12-19 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sipbrandy-rtpsec-07

2019-03-04 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24

2019-02-05 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-enterprise-pa-multihoming-08

2019-07-03 Thread Pete Resnick
oming-11#section-8.3 Fair enough. Thanks again for the updates. As the boilerplate for the review says, wait for instructions from your AD for further guidance, particularly in order to address Alissa's DISCUSS. pr -- Pete Resnick http://www.episteme.net/ All connections to the world are tenuous

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-enterprise-pa-multihoming-08

2019-07-01 Thread Pete Resnick
solutions. Is that second sentence right? If you are giving a general class of solutions, that seems agnostic to the particular solution. Just a bit confusing. Updated. A host SHOULD be able respond dynamically... Do you mean "is expected to" instead of "SH

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-path-protection-08

2019-08-29 Thread Pete Resnick
ublication.] I would suggest the authors to remove the phrase "(Early allocation by IANA)" in the document now as the referenced draft is in RFC-EDITOR queue and the early allocation tag is removed in the IANA page - https://www.iana.org/assignments/pcep/pcep.xhtml#pcep-objects That's fi

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lpwan-ipv6-static-context-hc-21

2019-08-22 Thread Pete Resnick
Thanks for the changes. Followup comments inline below; trimming the ones that already look fine. On 22 Aug 2019, at 8:51, dominique.bart...@orange.com wrote: Le 07/08/19 05:13, « Pete Resnick via Datatracker » a écrit : Section 7.1 or 7.3: [DB] your proposed rephrasing is not quite

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-13

2019-07-05 Thread Pete Resnick
for comments that could actually have an impact. Agree that they don't have teeth. Yep, what I figured. Would you kindly review the attached diff and comment on the changes? I'll wait for your comments before uploading. Yep, looks pretty good to me. Thanks. pr -- Pete Resnick http://www.epist

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-gellens-lost-validation-05

2020-03-08 Thread Pete Resnick
n-NENA-i3 client or server can use the tag or not as they wish. --Randall On 8 Mar 2020, at 12:59, Pete Resnick wrote: Hi Randy, Section 3 of the document defines the operations that one must perform in order to use the tag. It explains how to go beyond what 5222 provides by defining

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-gellens-lost-validation-05

2020-03-08 Thread Pete Resnick
a new tag, not defining a new protocol. --Randall On 7 Mar 2020, at 8:52, Pete Resnick via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed b

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-cpe-slaac-renum-04

2020-09-11 Thread Pete Resnick
cument has "Intend status: Informational". The two should be made to agree. - Bernie On Sep 9, 2020, at 8:45 PM, Fernando Gont wrote: Hello, Pete, Thanks a lot for your feedback! In-line.... On 9/9/20 16:39, Pete Resnick via Datatracker wrote: [] Major issues: None draft-ietf-v

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-framework-08

2020-06-30 Thread Pete Resnick
On 30 Jun 2020, at 7:24, Stewart Bryant wrote: On 29 Jun 2020, at 18:30, Pete Resnick via Datatracker wrote: Minor issues: It is not clear to me why this is being sent for Informational instead of Proposed Standard. The shepherd's writeup does not justify it, and in fact the writeup

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-new-block-10

2021-04-27 Thread Pete Resnick
ived, ..." Perfect. All of the others look fine. Thanks again for the quick reply. Cheers, pr -- Pete Resnick https://www.episteme.net/ All connections to the world are tenuous at best ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-new-block-10

2021-04-24 Thread Pete Resnick
On 24 Apr 2021, at 17:38, John C Klensin wrote: --On Saturday, April 24, 2021 14:33 -0700 Pete Resnick via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter-05

2022-02-15 Thread Pete Resnick
[Sorry; resending from the proper From address.] Oh, one other bit: In the directive at the top of the XML, you should add seriesNo="39" as an indicator to the RFC Editor to make sure that this document is added to BCP 39, not create a new BCP number. On 15 Feb 2022, at 14:02, Pe

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-emailcore-rfc5322bis-11

2024-04-21 Thread Pete Resnick
in the table (Table 1) in section 3.6 NEW: Though listed as optional in Table 1 of Section 3.6 That's an annoying artifact of xml2rfc. I'll have a go at fixing it. Thanks again, pr -- Pete Resnick https://www.episteme.net/ All connections to the world

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-https-tal-07

2019-03-22 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-enterprise-pa-multihoming-08

2019-06-04 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-13

2019-07-04 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-path-protection-08

2019-08-28 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-cbor-sequence-01

2019-09-17 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lpwan-ipv6-static-context-hc-21

2019-08-06 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-drlb-13

2019-11-05 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mboned-ieee802-mcast-problems-09

2019-10-14 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: On the Right Track I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6man-icmp-limits-07

2020-02-17 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-mboned-ieee802-mcast-problems-11

2020-01-08 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: On the Right Track I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-stir-passport-divert-07

2020-01-09 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-multi-provider-dnssec-04

2020-03-31 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-gellens-lost-validation-05

2020-03-07 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-problem-statement-of-mredhcpv6-05

2020-05-20 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

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