Hi Ralph,
Thank you for the review. We will have all acronyms expansion in next version
and add a reference for DC services.
Regards,
Lucy
-Original Message-
From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Ralph Droms
Sent: Friday, January 06, 2017 7:14 AM
To:
Reviewer: Lucy Yong
Review result: Ready with Nits
The draft is nearly ready for the publication.
Minor comment: Suggest adding this in security considerations: OWE
provides encryption over the wireless medium, i.e., Wi-Fi without
authentication. Thus it does not provide security for end-to-end
Thank you, Dino. Good, I understand it now.
Lucy
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From: Dino Farinacci [mailto:farina...@gmail.com]
Sent: Thursday, December 01, 2016 1:53 PM
To: Lucy yong
Cc: Jari Arkko; draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-l...@tools.ietf.org; General
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From: Dino Farinacci [mailto:farina...@gmail.com]
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join
com]
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05
> Lucy,
>
> Many thanks for your review.
>
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ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-manet-credit-window-07
Credit Windowing extension for DLEP
Reviewer: Lucy Yong
Review Date: 28-Nov-2016
IETF LC End Date: 28-Nov-2016
IESG Telechat date: 29-Nov-2016
Summary: This document specifies a tec
Dino,
please see inline below.
>> the draft assumes that PIM works within individual LISP sites but PIM
>> mcast transport may not be supported among LISP sites. However the
>> mechanism itself does not enforce a unique (unicast or mcast)
>> underlay transport among LISP sites. Could some
Hi Stig and Dino,
Pls see inline below.
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Send again. fix some template info.
From: Lucy yong
Sent: Monday, October 17, 2016 1:59 PM
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Subject: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05
I am the assigned Gen
Send again.
From: Lucy yong
Sent: Monday, October 17, 2016 1:59 PM
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Subject: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft
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Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ddos-protection-09
Multi-Path Time Synchronization
Reviewer: Lucy Yong
Review Date: 23-Sept-2016
IETF LC End Date: 28-Sept-2016
IESG Telechat date: 29-Sept-2016
Summary: This document is nearly
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Document: draft-moriaty-pkcs1-03
Reviewer: Lucy Yong
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Hi Jouni,
David and I work on it to address your comments.
Thanks,
Lucy
-Original Message-
From: Jouni Korhonen [mailto:jouni.nos...@gmail.com]
Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2016 10:40 AM
To: Lucy yong; gen-art@ietf.org (gen-art@ietf.org);
draft-ietf-tsvwg-gre-in-udp-encap@ietf.org
Hi Jouni,
OOPS, forget this one, sorry.
o My “complaint” of this document is basically on the following.. these are
writing
style things so feel free to neglect:
- It repeats.. the same statements multiple times.
Lucy: perhaps some can reference previous section.
- When reading the
Hi Jouni,
Thank you for the review and correction. Pls see inline below.
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From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Jouni
Sent: Friday, August 12, 2016 1:51 AM
To: gen-art@ietf.org (gen-art@ietf.org);
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Hi Jari,
I have fixed the nits identified by Ben and upload the new version (08).
Thanks,
Lucy
-Original Message-
From: Jari Arkko [mailto:jari.ar...@piuha.net]
Sent: Wednesday, August 06, 2014 6:00 PM
To: Lucy yong
Cc: Ben Campbell; gen-art@ietf.org Team (gen-art@ietf.org); i
Hi Ben,
See my reply inline w/ [lucy]
I apologize for the late response. I somehow missed your mail when it came in
originally. Comments inline. I've deleted sections where I don't have further
comment.
[Lucy] No problem.
Thanks!
Ben.
On Jul 15, 2014, at 3:18 PM, Lucy yong lucy.y
Hi Ben,
Thank you for the review and suggestions. Please see inline below w/ [Lucy]
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