Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-12-01 Thread Jari Arkko
On 01 Dec 2016, at 22:01, Dino Farinacci wrote: > There is no other text in the email. So can’t be sure what you are saying. > I’m guessing you are fine with the proposed text? yes, the one that you proposed signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-12-01 Thread Lucy yong
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05 > OK, forget my suggestion. I have a difficulty to parse this sentence > (second part) > > It determines the downstream destination for unicast head-end > replication and identifies the receiver

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-12-01 Thread Dino Farinacci
There is no other text in the email. So can’t be sure what you are saying. I’m guessing you are fine with the proposed text? My co-authors have to agree though. ;-) Dino > On Dec 1, 2016, at 11:55 AM, Jari Arkko wrote: > > That would work for me. > > Jari >

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-12-01 Thread Jari Arkko
That would work for me. Jari signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-12-01 Thread Dino Farinacci
From: Dino Farinacci [mailto:farina...@gmail.com] > Sent: Thursday, December 01, 2016 1:45 PM > To: Lucy yong > Cc: Jari Arkko; draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-l...@tools.ietf.org; > General Area Review Team; Stig Venaas > Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-12-01 Thread Lucy yong
-Original Message- From: Dino Farinacci [mailto:farina...@gmail.com] Sent: Thursday, December 01, 2016 1:45 PM To: Lucy yong Cc: Jari Arkko; draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-l...@tools.ietf.org; General Area Review Team; Stig Venaas Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-12-01 Thread Dino Farinacci
> Could you make this sentence more readable? > > It determines the downstream destination for unicast head-end replication > and identifies the > receiver ETR that needs to be notified should the root of the > distribution tree move to another site. > > "should be", "moving”? I do not

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-12-01 Thread Lucy yong
com] Sent: Thursday, December 01, 2016 1:07 PM To: Jari Arkko Cc: Lucy yong; draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-l...@tools.ietf.org; General Area Review Team; Stig Venaas Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05 > Lucy, > > Many thanks for your review. > &g

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-12-01 Thread Dino Farinacci
> Lucy, > > Many thanks for your review. > > Dino, Stig, does this discussion lead you to consider adding some > clarifications to the document? I am not going to require those (just posted > a no-obj for the document on today’s telechat), but wanted to give you an > opportunity to consider

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-12-01 Thread Jari Arkko
Lucy, Many thanks for your review. Dino, Stig, does this discussion lead you to consider adding some clarifications to the document? I am not going to require those (just posted a no-obj for the document on today’s telechat), but wanted to give you an opportunity to consider that. Jari

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-10-19 Thread Dino Farinacci
> Two. One at all LISP sites (not one per LISP site) and part of the overlay > and possibly one in the underlay. > [Lucy] Thank, Dino. This is helpful. So the attributes proposed in this draft > is used in the first PIM instance, right? These attributes are only used by > ETRs to send

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-10-19 Thread Lucy yong
Dino, please see inline below. >> the draft assumes that PIM works within individual LISP sites but PIM >> mcast transport may not be supported among LISP sites. However the >> mechanism itself does not enforce a unique (unicast or mcast) >> underlay transport among LISP sites. Could some

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-10-19 Thread Dino Farinacci
>> the draft assumes that PIM works within individual LISP sites but PIM >> mcast transport may not be supported among LISP sites. However the >> mechanism itself does not enforce a unique (unicast or mcast) underlay >> transport among LISP sites. Could some ETRs request unicast transport, >>

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-10-19 Thread Lucy yong
:59 PM > *To:* A. Jean Mahoney; General Area Review Team; > 'draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp....@tool.ietf.org' > *Subject:* [Gen-art] Review: > draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05 > > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Ar

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-10-18 Thread Stig Venaas (svenaas)
-for-lisp@tool.ietf.org' *Subject:* [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-10-17 Thread Dino Farinacci
> the draft assumes that PIM works within individual LISP sites but PIM mcast > transport may not be supported among LISP sites. However the mechanism itself > does not enforce a unique (unicast or mcast) underlay transport among LISP > sites. Could some ETRs request unicast transport, other

[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-10-17 Thread Lucy yong
Send again. fix some template info. From: Lucy yong Sent: Monday, October 17, 2016 1:59 PM To: A. Jean Mahoney; General Area Review Team; 'draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp@tool.ietf.org' Subject: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05 I am the assigned Gen

[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

2016-10-17 Thread Lucy yong
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at