@Duarte Here is my suggestion, and below the reasoning:
<https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-bCIX3pkrUKs/VKsEd7nUcHI/AAAAAAAAPHM/DjwNvXXznzk/s1600/poster_fish.png> - (@ also Tobias) while I like the "scatterbrains... remedy", I'm afraid this is too abstract here and requires too much figuring out. We must not forget that *even the fish* itself appears TOTALLY irrelevant to someone not in the know. (Here <http://blog.hubspot.com/marketing/great-call-to-action-examples> are some examples of brilliance for exactly this. Ironically the very first example is from our main competitor, if there ever was one: Evernote!) - The (stakkato) sentence captures the problem, the (resulting) solution and ends with an immediate call to action. - The "free*" is a strong selling point for almost anyone who bothers with open source, at least in my experience. - The asterisk and the "explanation" at bottom is "supposedly discrete" while it is obviously not - actually it is obviously intended to be seen, and the "yes, free" adds a bit of humour. The "check it out" is another call to action and in some sense the end of the poster. - I actually wouldn't mind a bit more jumbled lines, I mean spreading out in a somewhat wider angle. My mind is a lot more scattered than that ;-) - @Jeremy - "www.tiddlywiki.com" vs ".../poster", Jeremy suggested the ".../poster", I assume as a way to measure the effect of it all. Frankly, if I saw this url, I would still just go to tw.com particularly since I have to type it in manually. Jeremy - what do you say, can we skip "/poster"? - For phrasing the factual content, I say go with Jeremys suggestions. - Please do remove the watermark but if not visible then do add e.g "tiddlywiki.com" - Like Felix, I love the circles. I have no idea why, but I love them. Maybe it binds the sentences visually, subtly messaging they're connected into a story... somehow breaking the feeling of a list... I don't know. <:-) -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "TiddlyWiki" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To post to this group, send email to [email protected]. Visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/tiddlywiki. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout.
