Joe, Most of what I write he is purely extemporaneous. I don't often re-read and edit it. Sometimes I start a sentence with one thought in mind but that changes a little before the end of the sentence. The result sometimes is not representative of my best rhetoric or prose.
If it continues to be a problem let me know and I'll start polishing my writing up before posting. ...Bill! --- In [email protected], "Joe" <desert_woodworker@...> wrote: > > Bill!, > > Making we work too hard. You too. > > --Joe > > > "Bill!" <BillSmart@> wrote: > > > > In re-reading it I could have made it clearer by either: > > - repeating the word 'lessons' after the word 'them' in the latter part of > > the sentence. > > - using the noun 'lessons' instead of the pronoun 'them' in the latter > > part of the sentence. > > > > Better now? > ------------------------------------ Current Book Discussion: any Zen book that you recently have read or are reading! Talk about it today!Yahoo! Groups Links <*> To visit your group on the web, go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Zen_Forum/ <*> Your email settings: Individual Email | Traditional <*> To change settings online go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Zen_Forum/join (Yahoo! ID required) <*> To change settings via email: [email protected] [email protected] <*> To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: [email protected] <*> Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to: http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/
