<The context has made the poem tear-jerking> well, uh...umm, hmm, haw, hmm...is the above an ironic utterance on the notion of the 'melodramatic'??
--- Farah <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > Your poem, as always, is very beautiful. It's > atmosphere conveys such sadness; its like the tress > are mourning the loss too.The context has made the > poem tear-jerking. > > Thankyou for sharing it... > > Farah > --- In [email protected], jane bhandari > <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > > What images of diminishment. > > > > I have a winter poem here for you. Similar feeling > of sadness and time running out, written while I was > waiting for my father to die. > > > > > > > > THE TREES > > > > > > > > > > > > Here, the trees crowd closer. > > > > Even in the dark one feels their presence. > > > > In the stillest night they stir, and rustle > > > > With the shuffling sound of retreating feet, > > > > Mourners murmuring as they depart. > > > > > > > > After the first gales, leaves lie across the grass > > > > > Like corpses, whispering death in ghostly voices, > > > > And the wind keens through the empty branches, > > > > Sharpening their edges against the bitter sky, > > > > Cutting it into a grey shroud for dead summer. > > > > > > Jane Bhandari > > > > Farah [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: > > > > Time slipped out of my hands > > > > > > > > Time slipped out of my hand > > > > Like sand. > > > > Sifting out through an open fist > > > > And the little left upon my palm > > > > Was also soon gone > > > > As if blown away by wind. > > > > > > > > I watched with disbelieving eyes, > > > > This strange, bewildering performance > > > > As it passed the frenzied vigor of avalanche > > > > Then slowly pulsed down to a mere trickling line� > > > > > > > > Farah Shams (1999) > > > > > > > > Age > > > > Time passes, > > > > For some slowly. > > > > For others_ running. > > > > > > > > But in the end > > > > All are same. > > > > The bodies once young > > > > As strong young trees > > > > With tough branches, > > > > Sturdy roots > > > > Are reduced to mere skeletons > > > > With bare thin limbs > > > > And only a trickle of life > > > > Flowing in the trunk� > > > > > > > > And then_ they're lonely. > > > > With memories like gusts of wind > > > > Blowing, echoing, rumbling > > > > Through their bodies. > > > > Forcing the stiff branches to creak > > > > The hollow, empty body to groan� > > > > Till the nearly dead roots > > > > Can no longer stand this onslaught > > > > And then, they too uproot. > > > > > > > > Farah Shams (1999) > > > > > > > > > > > > Tree Tops > > > > I watched the rising trees soar up, so up > > > > Till I had to lie on ground > > > > So I wouldn't fall when I looked up > > > > And how I wished that I could too > > > > Soar up, so up� > > > > Until those down below > > > > Will have to lie down too. > > > > But I was no tree, no plant with roots, > > > > A plain mortal I was_ but yes_ I could! > > > > I had two arms and legs that walked > > > > So I climbed to the top� > > > > When atop the highest tree I stood > > > > And looked below to my beginnings > > > > I realized with sudden clarity > > > > The wisdom of me being not a tree_ > > > > Then some one too with arms and legs > > > > Would one day climb, and stand on me! > > > > > > > > Farah Shams (2000) > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > -- > > You are encouraged to post poetry, respond > critically to the poems circulated and participate > in discussions. 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