> Oh I liked it. It just needed a lot of editing. It does beg for a series.
> Hatch must be praying to every god known right now.

Yeah, I have to agree with you there.  "The West Wing" has faster pacing.

I don't think it needed a lot of editing, but the pace could have been sped
up.  It just seemed like you could have left all the footage in, squeezed it
into a 10-minute shorter time slot, and added a more "active" cliffhanger at
the end.  That would have had the audience leaning forward a bit more.

All in all, though, a good rebirth and good writing.

Respectfully,

Adam Phillip Churvis
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