> I think it's not our fault but that of the Englisch speakers: > Their sentence structure is very rigid and doesn't lend itself > much for the content rich long sentences that we are used too.
Long sentences are perfectly possible in English, as long as you get the punctuation right. Admittedly a lot of English speakers are lazy and break the sentences up into small, easy to manage chunks just to alleviate the need to work out where to put the commas etc! > But the main problem is the way that the use of short sentences > has affected their brains over time: They just can't stay > concentrated long enough during long sentences anymore to > understand the subtle nuances of what we try to express. That last sentence doesn't scan to me... The just is superfluous. The anymore needs to be worked into the sentence in a different manner to make it sound right. You also mixed past and present tenses! ;-) Something like this is better: They can no longer stay concentrated for long enough during long sentences to understand the subtle nuances of what we are trying to express. Just to demonstrate, long sentences are perfectly acceptable in English language, as long as you use the correct punctuation in the right places to let the reader draw breath appropriately, as otherwise the reader doesn't know how the sentence splits up until after they've read and thought about it, which spoils the meaning and generally makes the words meaningless. I was taught there should be punctuation wherever you pause when reading a sentence if the punctuation is right. Cheers, Richard - (not American... :) (and trying to be educational, not having a go at anyone) -- Author: Richard Purdie INET: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Fat City Hosting, San Diego, California -- http://www.fatcity.com --------------------------------------------------------------------- To REMOVE yourself from this mailing list, send an E-Mail message to: [EMAIL PROTECTED] (note EXACT spelling of 'ListGuru') and in the message BODY, include a line containing: UNSUB CHIPDIR-L (or the name of mailing list you want to be removed from). You may also send the HELP command for other information (like subscribing).
