Hi Kay, John, *

Kaj Kandler wrote:
[...]

Find attached my edited version of the A4 Flyer.

I modified the last section about ODF to reflect that it is now an ISO
Standard. I also replaced the OASIS log with an ISO logo.

In addition I corrected two spelling errors in the Copyright footer and
made it 7pt (from 8pt).

Please feel free to critique and make suggestions for improvements.

I'll try:

- I don't think we should still promote the fact that OpenOffice.org 2.0 is new. If we want to start with an historical overview (don't know if this will be the right way to start, if we don't promote a new major version, it should be rephrased, IMHO (including the second subtitle "OOo ... is available now")

- The title image is scaled up from a smaller size, so it's borders and lines are not sharp on the screen and even worse when printed out. Better to use a larger image scaled down. Alternatively we could use a vector format and export it to PDF to reach an antialiasing effect.

- The title should read OpenOffice.org 2 instead of OpenOffice.org 2.0 as the next version to come will be OOo 2.1.

- I searched for copyright information about the ISO logo and found some pages at the ISO website, which I didn't have the time to read thoroughly. But in short it seems to me that we are not allowed to use their logo (see http://www.iso.org/iso/en/xsite/namelogo.html).

- Information on Mac OS X seems to be quite outdated. The porting team (and QA) worked hard to reach our actual release scheme, so we should not tell users OOo 1.1.2 would be the last officially supported version.

IIRC (and that's what is to be found on the germanophone flyer http://de.openoffice.org/files/documents/66/3169/ooo2prodflyera3de.pdf) there should be these minimal specifications:
 - - Mac OS X 10.3.x or 10.4.x with X11
 - - 256 MByte RAM
 - - 350 MByte available disk space

Please correct me, if I'm wrong.

Sorry that I don't have the time to update the flyer by myself, but perhaps my comments are useful either.

Best regards

Bernhard

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