On Mon, 13 Nov 2006, Graham wrote:
OK all, Update at
http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/ooo2prodflyera4en_update.odt
Critiques please
Cheers
Yo
Pretty good. Comments in semi-random order:
The "completely free of any licence fees" part might need to be re-done.
It's under LGPL which is a license if I recall correctly.
Maybe some of the instances of the word "free" can be replaced with
'freedom" instead. It's a word that seems to be both more applicable and
part of a general marketing trend.
IIRC Koffice was the first to support ISO26300 OASIS, but it's a strong
point. What is the target audience? If it's EU folk, then a lot have
legislation encouraging or requiring open standards for productivity
documents.
If I understand correctly, OpenDocument is the only international standard
by a public standard organization for productivity software.
Built-in or in-built? If there is space, it might be useful to mention
that base can use other db engines.
The first line "introducing..." is a little heavy. Definitely OOo's
strengths are compatibility and interoperability.
-Lars
Lars Noodén ([EMAIL PROTECTED])
OpenOffice.org: Now ISO 26300 Standards Compliant !
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