Graham skrev:

OK all, Update at

http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/ooo2prodflyera4en_update.odt Critiques please

Hi,

Here are some comments, primarily to the graphic layout.

1. I opened the document in a standard OOo 2.0.4 on Linux, and that didn't work too well. The main problem is that my PC does not have the Garamond font that you used for most of page 1. It would be better if you exported the file to PDF and uploaded the PDF for everyone to view, since PDF is independent of what fonts you have installed.

2. When printed on a black-and-white printer, the "OpenOffice.org 2.0" at the top does not look so good since it's half-way hidden by the "shadow". I think the flyer ought to work well with both colour and b/w printers.

3. You should use the SVG version af the logo. It prints much nicer that the bit-mapped version.

Finally, there's a factual error in the text. It says that the current version of OOo for Mac is 1.1.2. Actually 2.0.4 is released for Mac.

Finn Gruwier Larsen

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