On Mon, 2006-11-13 at 20:26 +0100, Finn Gruwier Larsen wrote: > Graham skrev: > > > OK all, Update at > > > > http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/ooo2prodflyera4en_update.odt > > > > Critiques please > > Hi,
Hi, > > Here are some comments, primarily to the graphic layout. > > 1. I opened the document in a standard OOo 2.0.4 on Linux, and that > didn't work too well. The main problem is that my PC does not have the > Garamond font that you used for most of page 1. Hmm not sure what happened there, the stylist should be set for Dejavu Sans and Bitstream Charter now changed > It would be better if > you exported the file to PDF and uploaded the PDF for everyone to view, > since PDF is independent of what fonts you have installed. Done, but I also kept the editable odt file available > > 2. When printed on a black-and-white printer, the "OpenOffice.org 2.0" > at the top does not look so good since it's half-way hidden by the > "shadow". I think the flyer ought to work well with both colour and b/w > printers. Good point, I'll fiddle another banner without the gradient BG > > 3. You should use the SVG version af the logo. It prints much nicer that > the bit-mapped version. > > Finally, there's a factual error in the text. It says that the current > version of OOo for Mac is 1.1.2. Actually 2.0.4 is released for Mac. Erk that was supposed to be changed, missed it, my bad :) > > Finn Gruwier Larsen Many Thanks New editable draft: http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/ooo2prodflyera4en_update.odt PDF: http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/ooo2prodflyera4en_update.pdf Cheers Yo -- "GET LEGAL - GET OPENOFFICE.ORG" http://why.openoffice.org ISO 26300 compliant Graham Lauder, OpenOffice.org MarCon (Marketing Contact) NZ http://marketing.openoffice.org/contacts.html INGOTs Assessor Trainer (International Grades in Office Technologies) www.theingots.org.nz Get Dressed - Get OOoGear Gear for the well dressed OOo Advocate http://ooogear.co.nz --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
