On Mon, 2006-11-13 at 13:51 -0500, Lars D. Noodén wrote: > On Mon, 13 Nov 2006, Graham wrote: > > OK all, Update at > > > > http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/ooo2prodflyera4en_update.odt > > > > Critiques please > > > > Cheers > > Yo > > Pretty good. Comments in semi-random order: > > The "completely free of any licence fees" part might need to be re-done. > It's under LGPL which is a license if I recall correctly.
The LGPL is noted, but the point of this line is that there are no license _fees_. > > Maybe some of the instances of the word "free" can be replaced with > 'freedom" instead. It's a word that seems to be both more applicable and > part of a general marketing trend. In this particular instance the free=freedom is implied because of context. From a selling POV Free is snappy, Freedom is clumsy. It's a debate that has gone on for a long time, but that debate is around the word in isolation, however the ambivalence is removed in context in this case > > IIRC Koffice was the first to support ISO26300 OASIS, but it's a strong > point. What is the target audience? If it's EU folk, then a lot have > legislation encouraging or requiring open standards for productivity > documents. > > If I understand correctly, OpenDocument is the only international standard > by a public standard organization for productivity software. > > Built-in or in-built? If there is space, it might be useful to mention > that base can use other db engines. > > The first line "introducing..." is a little heavy. Definitely OOo's > strengths are compatibility and interoperability. Yep I see your point and I agree. Done! > > -Lars > > Lars Noodén ([EMAIL PROTECTED]) > OpenOffice.org: Now ISO 26300 Standards Compliant ! > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] -- "GET LEGAL - GET OPENOFFICE.ORG" http://why.openoffice.org ISO 26300 compliant Graham Lauder, OpenOffice.org MarCon (Marketing Contact) NZ http://marketing.openoffice.org/contacts.html INGOTs Assessor Trainer (International Grades in Office Technologies) www.theingots.org.nz Get Dressed - Get OOoGear Gear for the well dressed OOo Advocate http://ooogear.co.nz --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
