-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 Graham, > Kaj would you object if I spent some time on this? not at all. I feel utterly unqualified for this enormous amount of changes. I'm not a native speaker and my writing skills are limited.
Take a stab at it. Kaj Graham wrote: > On Sat, 2006-11-11 at 11:12 +0100, Bernhard Dippold wrote: >> Hi Kay, John, * >> >> Kaj Kandler wrote: >>> [...] >>> >>> Find attached my edited version of the A4 Flyer. >>> >>> I modified the last section about ODF to reflect that it is now an ISO >>> Standard. I also replaced the OASIS log with an ISO logo. >>> >>> In addition I corrected two spelling errors in the Copyright footer and >>> made it 7pt (from 8pt). >>> >>> Please feel free to critique and make suggestions for improvements. >> I'll try: >> >> - I don't think we should still promote the fact that OpenOffice.org 2.0 >> is new. If we want to start with an historical overview (don't know if >> this will be the right way to start, if we don't promote a new major >> version, it should be rephrased, IMHO (including the second subtitle >> "OOo ... is available now") > > +1 > >> - The title image is scaled up from a smaller size, so it's borders and >> lines are not sharp on the screen and even worse when printed out. >> Better to use a larger image scaled down. Alternatively we could use a >> vector format and export it to PDF to reach an antialiasing effect. > > +1 > >> - The title should read OpenOffice.org 2 instead of OpenOffice.org 2.0 >> as the next version to come will be OOo 2.1. >> >> - I searched for copyright information about the ISO logo and found some >> pages at the ISO website, which I didn't have the time to read >> thoroughly. But in short it seems to me that we are not allowed to use >> their logo (see http://www.iso.org/iso/en/xsite/namelogo.html). > > I also did some research on this earlier. "Complies with ISO 26300"in > txt, seems to be the accepted norm > > > Also it makes no use of the present Marketing themes: Why OpenOffice > and Open.For Business. > > So I think that a complete rewrite is in order. > > My brain has stalled on the "Community" flyer for the moment. > > > Cheers > Yo - -- [EMAIL PROTECTED] http://conficio.blogspot.com/ ================================================ | We teach software one screencast at a time | ================================================ http://www.conficio.com/ Tel: +1 (781) 632 5773 - Fax: +1 (781) 207 9159 Conficio P.O.Box 761062, Melrose, MA 02176 -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.5 (MingW32) iD8DBQFFVq5URDUvrJRNjTARAmTDAJ4oYreVet0s/I/DnnmNtDbRx59zjACfRpBp JIi0cqNNcfiV7uPalkL5ZZg= =PiRl -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
