Cor Nouws schreef:
Charles-H. Schulz schreef:
Nonetheless, I think this
slogan "latest office for free! Genuine? Goto, etc." makes us look cheap.
I'd push my "own" "We enable participation. See how. OpenOffice.org"
Maybe we can write down what ideas and emotions we expect to wake up in
our audience, when seeing one or the other?
And why we think people will follow the link to read more.
New version:
"Can also yóu have the latest office for free? Genuine!"
- It anticipates on the feeling that others also do it (also you)
- Tells what it is about (office), and
- Anticipates on the interest for the 'latest office'.
- People like free
Ideas?
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Cor Nouws
Arnhem - Netherlands
nl.OpenOffice.org - marketing contact
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