On Wed, Jan 11, 2017 at 3:51 PM, Julien NICOLAS <julien.nico...@nereide.fr>
wrote:

> [...]
> This is why I prefer the actual sentence "Apache OFBiz® is an open source
> product for the automation of enterprise processes that includes framework
> components and business applications"
>

>From a trademark best practice perspective the above is incorrect (yeah...
it is in our website) and should be changed to its equivalent:

"The Apache OFBiz® open source product for the automation of enterprise
processes"

and its longer (descriptive) version would be:

"The Apache OFBiz® open source product for the automation of enterprise
processes includes framework components and business applications"

A bit ugly.

Jacopo

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