Jörg Jahnke wrote: > Hi Andrea, the Italian version of the page is now online at > http://update.services.openoffice.org/ooo/204_it.html and uses the > download link you mentioned below.
Thanks! A few comments: * "Grazie per aver usato OOo" should be replaced by "Grazie perché usate OOo"; the former seems to me to convey a definitely past meaning and is properly used only if you are not using OOo any more (which is not our intention, of course!). * As Cor pointed out for the Dutch page, also the Italian page mentions development versions and RCs. Moreover, "versione finale candidata" is totally meaningless. So the whole text of that section should be changed from -- Per accedere all'ultima versione Snapshot o versione finale candidata di OpenOffice.org per sviluppatori, fate clic sul seguente collegamento: -- into: -- Per scaricare l'ultima versione di OpenOffice.org, fate clic sul seguente collegamento: -- if Cor's and my interpretation (i.e., we are targeting end users and offering released versions) is right. * In the fourth section, the title "CONTRIBUTO" should be "CONTRIBUIRE" * In the fourth section, the localized Contributing link should be used, i.e., http://it.openoffice.org/contribuire/ (that part of our website is stable, so you can link to it safely). May we get some numbers? Will we be able to know how many users are notified of the update availability and how many of them get to this page? It would be an invualuable piece of information for us. Thanks, Andrea Pescetti - Italian NL project. --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
