Hi Andrea,
Andrea Pescetti wrote:
Jörg Jahnke wrote:
Hi Andrea, the Italian version of the page is now online at
http://update.services.openoffice.org/ooo/204_it.html and uses the
download link you mentioned below.
Thanks!
A few comments:
* "Grazie per aver usato OOo" should be replaced by "Grazie perché
usate OOo"; the former seems to me to convey a definitely past
meaning and is properly used only if you are not using OOo any
more (which is not our intention, of course!).
Yes, I definitively agree. I actually had suggested to replace aver
usato with *Grazie per aver scelto*. Let me know what you think....
* As Cor pointed out for the Dutch page, also the Italian page mentions
development versions and RCs. Moreover, "versione finale candidata" is
totally meaningless. So the whole text of that section should be
changed from
--
Per accedere all'ultima versione Snapshot o versione finale candidata
di OpenOffice.org per sviluppatori, fate clic sul seguente
collegamento:
--
into:
--
Per scaricare l'ultima versione di OpenOffice.org, fate clic sul
seguente collegamento:
--
if Cor's and my interpretation (i.e., we are targeting end users and
offering released versions) is right.
* In the fourth section, the title "CONTRIBUTO" should be "CONTRIBUIRE"
* In the fourth section, the localized Contributing link should be used,
i.e., http://it.openoffice.org/contribuire/
(that part of our website is stable, so you can link to it safely).
All very valid suggestions...
Rafaella
May we get some numbers? Will we be able to know how many users are
notified of the update availability and how many of them get to this
page? It would be an invualuable piece of information for us.
Thanks,
Andrea Pescetti - Italian NL project.
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