Daniel wrote:
CPH wrote: [regarding the listing of events] > - Is the "Where" necessary ? Or would "In:" be better ? "Location" would be ideal.
IMO, no word is necessary. Would anyone be confused by just having the city and country listed? What else would they be, except the location?
> - On the right "About OOo" should be "About Us" or "About OpenOffice.org"
I vote for "About the product".
I agree with "About the product", for the reasons Daniel mentioned in his post.
> - "OOo in the Press" maybe should be simply "Media mentions" ?
That's a thought. Do you think most people would understand what that means?
I suggest "OOo in the Media", unless the "OOo" is considered to be a problem here.
Now here are some more editorial comments from me, all very minor:
(1) In the Download box in the center of the page, make the words "OpenOffice.org 2.0" larger than the "Free Download" and "Buy CDs" text.
(2) Change "Upcoming Events" to "Coming Events".
(3) In the list under "For Developers", use "To Do List" as in Matthew's version, not "Todo".
(4) Remove the capital "L" from "Linguistic".
Regards, Jean
Jean Hollis Weber
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