Hi Michelle,

Module 6 looks great to me. I only have two comments.

1) Page 51, "Then, enable and restart the SMF services by using the 
svc:/network/ipfilter command." It's incorrect to call "svc:/network/ipfilter" 
a command. This sentence could be changed as the line above the first Note at 
the same page: "Then, enable and restart the svc:network/ipfilter service by 
using the svcadm command."

2) Page 52 seems duplicated with page 51. And the content of p52 is also a 
little outdated. For example, /etc/ipf/pfil.ap is obsolete since the PFHooks 
project was integrated. I suggest removing the whole page.
 
 
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