yifan xu wrote: > Hi Michelle, > > Module 6 looks great to me. I only have two comments. > > 1) Page 51, "Then, enable and restart the SMF services by using the > svc:/network/ipfilter command." It's incorrect to call > "svc:/network/ipfilter" a command. This sentence could be changed as the line > above the first Note at the same page: "Then, enable and restart the > svc:network/ipfilter service by using the svcadm command." > fixed.
> 2) Page 52 seems duplicated with page 51. And the content of p52 is also a > little outdated. For example, /etc/ipf/pfil.ap is obsolete since the PFHooks > project was integrated. I suggest removing the whole page. > done. Thank you! I'll send revised copy for final review when I finish incorporating all feedback. -Michelle > > This message posted from opensolaris.org > _______________________________________________ > docs-discuss mailing list > docs-discuss at opensolaris.org
