Alan Coopersmith wrote: > Pg. 7: "Relevance" - Do you mean 2007, not 2008? fixed. > > Pg. 14: x64 is not just AMD any more - change "AMD x64" to just "x64"? agreed. > > Pg. 17: OpenGrok - should Mercurial be added to the list? good point, I've added a section about source repositories. > > Pg. 20: ZFS - haven't they dropped the "Zettabyte" name? (If not, > shouldn't it be spelled the same as on pg. 24?) changed both to ZFS. > > Pg. 50: URL for NWAM info has visible formatting tags in it. fixed.
> > Pg. 57: "Prebuilt OpenSolaris distributions are limited to SX:CR" > - old name for SX:CE > - what about Belenix? Nexenta? Schillix? Martux? SX:DE? added. > > Pg. 57: Memory requirements - should it mention the 768 Mb requirement > for the Developer installer? yes, fixed. > > Module 8: Much of what is described is specific to the ON community, > not the rest of OpenSolaris - it should be clearly labeled as such. labeled. > > Pg. 66: The last 2 paragraphs about Perl's POSIX.pod seems out of > place - what does it have to do with the kernel threading model? I commented out these two paras. > > > Pg. 106: Mozilla has been removed from Solaris/OpenSolaris - should this > example use firefox instead? I'll need help to update the entire example with different variables. Max Bruning authored this in a training piece, maybe he has a newer example that we can use instead? I'll dig around. > Thanks so much for this feedback, Alan! When I finish incorporating the changes submitted by other reviewers, I'll post new copy with change bars. Much appreciated! -Michelle
