Hi Michelle,
Comments on "Module 4 Configuring Zones"
* Better to have picture/block diagram so that users can have a better
understanding.
* Its good to mention about "scratch zone" and "whole-zoot zone" .
* In the Zones exercise we can have one zone which is of "scratch zone"
and other one as "whole-root zone" .
~ Pradhap.D
yifan xu wrote:
> Hi Michelle,
>
> Module 6 looks great to me. I only have two comments.
>
> 1) Page 51, "Then, enable and restart the SMF services by using the
> svc:/network/ipfilter command." It's incorrect to call
> "svc:/network/ipfilter" a command. This sentence could be changed as the line
> above the first Note at the same page: "Then, enable and restart the
> svc:network/ipfilter service by using the svcadm command."
>
> 2) Page 52 seems duplicated with page 51. And the content of p52 is also a
> little outdated. For example, /etc/ipf/pfil.ap is obsolete since the PFHooks
> project was integrated. I suggest removing the whole page.
>
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