Pradhap Devarajan wrote: > Hi Michelle, > Comments on "Module 4 Configuring Zones" > * Better to have picture/block diagram so that users can have a better > understanding.
If you know of a good diagram I could use, I will make this addition. > * Its good to mention about "scratch zone" and "whole-zoot zone" . > * In the Zones exercise we can have one zone which is of "scratch zone" > and other one as "whole-root zone" . I'm not sure that I understand the change you are suggesting here, can you give me some more specifics? I heard about exclusive and shared-IP zones, but not whole-root and scratch :) Thanks for your time to do this! -Michelle > > ~ Pradhap.D > > yifan xu wrote: > >>Hi Michelle, >> >>Module 6 looks great to me. I only have two comments. >> >>1) Page 51, "Then, enable and restart the SMF services by using the >>svc:/network/ipfilter command." It's incorrect to call >>"svc:/network/ipfilter" a command. This sentence could be changed as the line >>above the first Note at the same page: "Then, enable and restart the >>svc:network/ipfilter service by using the svcadm command." >> >>2) Page 52 seems duplicated with page 51. And the content of p52 is also a >>little outdated. For example, /etc/ipf/pfil.ap is obsolete since the PFHooks >>project was integrated. I suggest removing the whole page. >> >> >>This message posted from opensolaris.org >>_______________________________________________ >>docs-discuss mailing list >>docs-discuss at opensolaris.org >> > > _______________________________________________ > docs-discuss mailing list > docs-discuss at opensolaris.org
