--- Pale Rider <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> This is a pretty interesting take, and largely believable, but there
> are some aspects I'm not sure of. Leaving aside grammar and such, I'm
> annoyed by the failure to explain the initial incident in the story,
> that is, Naruto showing up looking dishevelled and beaten.

It seemed fairly obvious to me.  Naruto was raped, brutally.  It's not
the kind of thing anyone in the story would have reason to outright
say, especially given Naruto's age at the time.

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